Maybe you shouldn’t have taught me
How to wait for an eternity
for something good to come along
Maybe you should see me
before this world ends
Maybe you should not have held my hand
and told me to wait with you a little longer
Through the stormy skies and starry nights
Should not have stood so close,
with your false promise of more
your heady scent going straight to my head
Not told me your stories
until they seemed like mine
created crystal dreams
breakable and fragile
You are my tragedy
Maybe I was yours
or maybe I was that girl
with no flowers to give
and no hearts to hold
and in the twilight
Maybe we should still
Fall?
All frozen
In the warm tones of our blue
hello, this was reaaaallyy mushy I know, but this is for my future soft boy with pretty eyes and messy hair. Only if he exists, haha π
a girl can dream π
and I think hand-holding art is so pretty, it speaks to me a lot more than any other form of intimate art!
Thank You for all the love x
Damn! This poem made me cry!! β€οΈ
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hello, I’m glad it moved you like that. thank you so much x
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Thank you for posting this. It’s an absolute beauty! β£οΈ
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Heartwarming, may I share this on a poetry site? π Full credit given of course.
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Hi, thank you so much. sure, please share it, do send me a link or something π
love x
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Our precious monthly savagesavante poem! π It’s like receiving your favourite magazine in the post π.
“hello, this was reaaaallyy mushy I know”
I never knew you were so mushy! Lol. I have such a skewed perspective of you as being this super-dark person.
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hello, That is so kind and means so much to me. I probably should not put it in words how much and jinx it. haha
I am probably this tragic, dark and romantic person. Gets really hard to pin me down, in coming years maybe I’ll be all sunshine and rainbows.
Thank you x
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“I probably should not put it in words how much and jinx it.”
Haha! ππ.
“I am probably this tragic, dark and romantic person.”
π . Well, you’re putting it to good effect at the moment in your writing, at least! You’re welcome! π€
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I’m glad you are enjoying it. thank you π
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πAlways!
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Your poem reads like a dream. Very nice. π
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Hi, That made my day. Thank you so much π
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Moving and heartwarming! π
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Hello, Thank you so much β€
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You are welcome. π
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I wish that star-enchanted boy will find you, after all some eerie forces conspire to bring love to love, as I like to believe. And it is the left wing and right wing, holy serpents that through alchemy find freedom and happiness in life and hereafter…
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star-enchanted boy, wow I’m already starry eyed. I don’t know about the machinations of the divine fate or eerie forces and the way they all work, it is mysterious but when you put it this way, I might believe it too. thank you so much
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this is for your future boy and it’s amazing
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hello, thank You so much. means a lot x
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Haha, maybe or maybe not. who knows, who can say. I just write π
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did a 360. why? I was ready to enjoy this :’)
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I didn’t listen because I didn’t see it. also I like your photography more so that is where my taste lies unfortunately.
well, please continue enjoying the food π
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eat butter chicken too. might like it!
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the language difference is so painfully obvious in this one!
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well, Mister Baldr could have taken a local guide with him to help him navigate the area better and not get scammed like that. I cant vouch for everyone being honest.
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and clearly the staff cannot understand English. but nonetheless, all around the world, in all parts we can get scammers, mean and rude people. I think it’s more to do with human flaw than race or ethnicity. but just a perspective, u don’t have to agree.
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well, if u someday decide to visit (highly unlikely) I’ll take you to the amaze local food joints and your chances of being scammed would be zero. that is all I can vouch for not for the actions of my “brothers” scamming your “brother”.
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I’m an agnostic.. bordering on atheism.
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i’m indian. brought up in a Hindu family but I don’t adhere to all the beliefs and system. I see flaws and I also see the faith.
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where should i start from ?? I can tell you bout the economic conditions, the historical colonialism, corrupt governments and lack of institutional and public infrastructures that all in all contribute in “extreme” poverty here. don’t worry, we will get there π
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as I said I’m a writer. writing is my content on WordPress. focus on the words, I know it might be difficult since English is not your Lang but try
you too, wash your hands as well. lack of taste is a symptom of covid
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okaayy. wow! where are u from ?? Norway ??
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ahhh German. great land of fascism, genocide and Albert Einstein nice
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hardly comes in my popular culture of Germany. I know Hitler, Goebbles and the likes. also sausages.
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Oktoberfest and the beers. btw tell me are u a Nazi or anti-semite? does that still exist.
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nice.
why do u know so much about India for someone who doesn’t like Indians?
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okaayy cool
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I can tell English is not your first language either so u might also understand how confusing it gets.
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well, okay. where are u from then? I’m guessing somewhere in Europe. tell me so I can guess your pagan gods as well and tell them to watch u too
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I like this poem. If I had a woman feeling that way about me, I’d be much happier. It’s nice to know that a woman can feel it, in this day and age.
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hello, love and compassion is never hard to find. I’m sure you will do too
thank you so much β€
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It’d be nice if that were true. Compassion and love are extremely hard to find.
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well, you make a fair point. I guess. but I always look for it in places that I have prioritised. my mom, my granny, my friends. little things that makes me happy without asking for any thing in return.
maybe, I have stopped chasing that idea of grand love and try to find it even in a small bug
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It’s hard to say what I mean. I’ve prioritized the same people, but they abuse me. They don’t listen to me. They marginalize me. They think everything I do isn’t serious.
The idea of grand love is the most important to pursue. In Plato’s Symposium, they are talking about it. It’s the ability to appreciate the good, and find it in all things. I think that’s a worthy pursuit, on worth getting lost in. I can find no other more important pursuit in our lives, than to chase the universal meaning of love. It brings us closest to God, so therefore, perfection.
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oh, I’m sorry to hear that. and I’m also sorry to assume every body has same relations like I do.
Well, you should chase the universal meaning of love. I mean at the end of the day we all want to go home to somebody we love and respect. somebody who understands us. so that does make it worthy. agreed. I was merely talking about something on grand scale and pretentious. maybe I am really sceptical when it comes to love and dont easily believe that it could mean more like they talk about in books. it just sounds weird to me
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It’s real. I don’t think romance is the meaning to life. I just think it’s one of the things that makes life a lot nicer to live. If you do it right. Most people don’t, which is why you’re skeptical of it. Me too, actually.
It has to be built on friendship first. Almost exclusively. The feeling of being in love is a fleeting thing. It goes away after three to four years. It’s not really a good place to put meaning, but the camaraderie of not having to live life alone, of building and sharing a space with someone, it’s about the only thing I can find in life that’s has a meaning. When it fails, it’s a bad time to be alive.
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wow, this is so beautifully put. I wouldn’t have ever described it this way, you gave it a very rational yet emotional touch.
also bad to be alive. haha. okay I get it
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Of course, meaning comes from Christ. That’s a given. But love is about the only worthy pursuit in life. It is the bridge between mankind and the divine.
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amen. wouldn’t disagree on this
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I feel like I said too much. I’m embarrassed now.
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it’s alright. please don’t be. it made me really think and correct my narrow perspective
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Eloquent and heartfelt.
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hello, thank you so much
means a lot x
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I understand. Some seem to get comments in bunches. I’ve never had that, no doubt, on me, so I always appreciate any feedback.
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sure, would do that β€
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Very well composed, great flow and fluency to connect the right sensation chords and send some “essential tremors” . I love your uniqueness of presentation. Though, I rarely comment (do click the like star always though), this one was different. Touched a raw nerve. It bled for a while and then Coagulated in this comment. Thanks for sharing. Regards. Jay
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wow. thank you so much for these beautiful words. glad it touched you so deeply, these emotions validate my writing somehow. much love x
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Heartbreaking yet so beautiful!
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hey, You are too kind. Thank you so much for reading π
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